Sunday 6 July 2014

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED, PART 28

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED

Part 28





Maan cupped Geet’s face. We’re married, love. There was such joy on his face that Geet couldn’t help, she cried out and hugged him. All her reserve had broken, she felt bare of whole past and doings and the sheet of existence was white as that of a newborn. She felt new, whole. Reborn.

Promise me… promise me you’ll never ever leave me.
 
He kissed the top of her head. I won’t. Never again.
 
 
 
 
Maan bought the glass of water for her. Everyone has left and we are alone now. He told with a naughty smirk, everyone being Nikita and servants. Unaffected, she looked up at him with blood shot eyes, another tear gliding across her cheek dropping down on her red and gold bangles. She had been like this for more than an hour now. It was as though world had come to a halt n she couldn’t move. Maan had to forcefully push some into her mouth.
 
Love why are you still crying? He took seat beside her on the edge of their bed which was decorated erotically by none other than Nikita. Whole room looked ravishing with satin, cherry rose pink drapes hanging over the bed and windows contrasting beguilingly with the crimson walls. Dim lights casted shadows artistically and expensive candles were littered on shelves and tables spreading a scent so mild and delighting, it was almost intoxicating. Roses of all shades of red rested in vases, their petals scattered around the base. Aren’t you happy?
 
She shook her head staring down at some mysterious spot on her designer lehenga. How could she possibly explain this feeling? Her whole body was tingly, numb with happiness she hadn’t felt in a long-long time. Her heart felt like it would burst open any moment. Just recently she had realized her love for him and now she was married. Married… it felt like a joke only it wasn’t. This was reality. Reality was first time so beautiful.
 
I… I am… overwhelmed…Maan. Her stammering reminded him of the old times that she didn’t know about.
 
Baby, you first drink this. He brought the glass to her lips and she drank from it. Then he wiped her tears cupping her cheeks. Did I mention how absolutely breathtaking you are looking as my bride? I have no idea how I got so lucky.
 
If anyone’s is lucky that’s me. Glancing at him, she told honestly, innocently. I had given up all hope about using that ‘lucky’ word for myself in this lifetime. Unable to stop she hugged him, her heavy attire making hundreds of weird noises. His arms wrapped around her in no time as he pulled her into his lap. It all felt so natural, like they were meant to be like this.
 
Now tell me what’s wrong? He whispered kissing tenderly a spot behind her ear.
 
Nothing is wrong. I am just… afraid. This couldn’t be permanent. Doesn’t it feel like a dream? Dreams break. Good things always come to an end. What she needed was assurance even if it was only a lie.
 
She was behaving so unusual, since finding her this was very first time he was seeing the glimpse of Geet he had first fallen in love with. Her eyes unsure; face a mirror of her heart and she was afraid, people got afraid when they feared losing something-someone-they cared for. And she definitely cared for him. Despite the lies she threw around.
 
Who said truth was bitter? Those lies were unbearable and this truth was a soothing balm.
 
You believe me Geet, right?
 
I believe you but I don’t-
 
No. If you believe me there shouldn’t be buts and doubts. Tell me you believe me, say it out loud.
 
Nodding, she spoke firmly. I believe you Maan. I really do.
 
You are a very good girl. He smiled pecking her forehead. Forget everything that has been a part of your life till now. As a husband you are my responsibility, I’ll take care of you sweetheart and everything will be alright. I love you, remember?
 
He loved her. He loved her. He loved her.
 
No protest, no denying, no fighting. She just grinned full of life, unlike other times it reached her eyes and that smile blossomed inside him making him ecstatic.
 
I am probably crushing you. This lehenga is twice my weight.She stood up unable to go far as he pulled her back down.
 
But I love it. He said kissing her neck seductively.
 
She pulled back and looked into his eyes deeply. Her kiss on his lips was brief but conveyed everything. Cheeks rosy with blush she spoke softly.Then let’s get it off me and you can keep it.
 
He chuckled. I like that idea. Making her sit on the bed, he stood in front of her and she inwardly applauded his patience as he slowly, lovingly removed the clips and jewels. His hands burned her skin wherever they touched and it was sweet agony, one she wasn’t sure should end or not. Throwing the dubbatta somewhere-so much for loving the attire-he worked on the knots of her top. Once the top was off to leave her breasts clad in just a lacy bra, he tipped her face up and pecked her lips. You would have to stand up princess for me to remove that thing.She giggled standing up. In a smooth tug the skirt was down, pooling around her feet.
 
Where are you going? She asked holding his hand.
 
Just a sec. He came back with a first aid box and skimpy lingerie.
 
What is all this? She asked amused.
 
This is for you. He held up the first aid box and then raising the lingerie said with a smirk. This is for me.



 
Holding her hand he applied the ointment on the back of her elbow. I hurt you.
 
Not like I just stood there helpless. I think I hit you more. She pecked above his collar bone where a dull blue bruise lay. And you were already injured.
 
He scoffed. You hit me more? In your dreams, baby. He made her lie on the bed proceeding to remove the panties and open her legs.
 
What-

Shhh… I was pretty rough with you.
 He said setting his eyes on her privates making her flush. It was nothing he had never seen before, still now, that his intense orbs touched her it felt different, almost pristine and yet so arousing.
 
Everything you give is precious. She whispered breathlessly. You didn’t hurt me, not at all.
 
His fingers covered in soothing ointment slowly circled over the outside and inside of her lower lips. She moaned softly and he was having hard time not delving deep into her. She was embarrassed so feel herself getting wet. Ending the torture for both of them he made her wear the lingerie and took off his clothes, finally lying down beside her.
 
And we sleep? She asked confused like hell.
 
Yes, we sleep. I know you are worn out.
 
But this is our wedding night.
 
Every night will be our wedding night from now on.
 
Promise? She asked half blushing-half giggling.
 
Promise. He pulled her into him and she snuggled closer, kissing his chest, not wanting this night to ever end and at the same time wishing the next morning to come soon so they could start their new life, just the two of them and their love.
 
 
 
His eyes opened and the first thing his mind focused on was his beautiful wifey. Wife!! Wow, the word felt good in his mind. He said it aloud. Geet Singh Khurana, MSK’s Wife. Better on tongue, he grinned foolishly looking at her.
 
Grudgingly leaving the heaven of her arms, he went to get ready. When he came out she was lying flat on her back, quilt twisted around her legs and covering very little… leaving everything provocatively open. The lingerie she donned was really sexy, midnight blue against her milky white skin and it barely covered her breasts. He climbed over the bed, removing the hairs from her neck for his lips.
 
Her eyes opened feeling his wet, hot kisses along her neck and jaw.Morning. She moaned a big smile spreading on her face.
 
He wished her in his style covering her mouth with his. She responded hungrily, snaking her hands around his neck n pulling him down. His body, half pressed against her, made her sigh. But he was dressed she realized. Still in sleep and irritated to the core for not having him naked she tried to get rid of his clothes impatiently. Calm down tigress. He pulled back, panting. I have to go to office, am already late.
 
You’re going to leave your wife on first day of our married life?
 
‘Your wife’ from her mouth, and he was dead. She made a puppy face, her wild hairs sprawled around her head and eyes big, that pout on her just-kissed sexy lips made his cock hard and not to forget those plump breasts pushing and poking into him. He had to get away fast or they won’t be able to get out before next couple of hours.
 
It made his heart break. Geet was one of those who never made demands or asked for something out rightly, he couldn’t believe she actually was asking him to stay when he had left her without notice-sometimes for days-before and she never said a word in complaint.
 
I have to get some things done love. There is a surprise I have planned for you.
 
I don’t need anything. She whined blinking her eyes.
 
Don’t do that or I won’t be able to go and what I have planned will be ruined.
 
Fine. Go. He sat up and she pulled the quilt over her head. Now don’t hide the view from me. He laughed pulling the quilt down and giving her another breathtaking kiss. I will be back fast. Love you.
 
 
 
She contemplated what to do. It had been 3 hours, 47 minutes and 23 seconds since he left. His fast hadn’t yet come.
 
Geet knew she shouldn’t be this impatient, she was behaving like a clingy wife-but her nerves were supernaturally charged. This was her first day as a married woman and she hadn’t even made breakfast for him and rather whined like a child keeping him from going to work. Well, he didn’t stop-which was so like Maan-but she should have gotten up before him, prepared breakfast, selected his clothes and maybe joined in for the shower.
 
Such negligence was intolerable. She chided herself mentally. He was her husband and she had duties to fulfill. He would be depending on her for all his needs- material, emotional and physical and she knew he deserved the very best. She blushed and nearly danced to her room to change. When was the last time she was this happy? Just last night. She giggled like a teenager, feeling alive. A man had resurrected her, treated her wounds in a way that even the scars had disappeared.
 
Before going out her eyes fell on the phone. She had hurt another person. Guilt pierced her and she pushed it away feeling bad but promising that she would ask for forgiveness, just not now.
 
 
Outside it was humid and hot; Maan removed his tie groaning in the chilled air of AC. His heart fluttered at the thought of Geet waiting for him to arrive. His little, wild Geet… his life, now his wife. Unable to take another moment of distance he raced up the stairs to meet her, hardly feeling the floor under his feet because he was actually flying.
 
He peeked into the bathroom because Geet wasn’t in the bedroom. And when he checked she wasn’t anywhere in the entire farm house. His heart didn’t wait to start pounding frantically. He called Nikki to see if Geet was with her but she wasn’t. She wasn’t anywhere that he knew of. Not at his house, not at Nikki’s place, she didn’t even have a mobile on her.
 
I can’t believe that she is again gone. Nikita said looking at her dismal brother whose hairs were disheveled from running hands through them umpteen times.
 
She couldn’t leave… now that… He couldn’t believe. She was so happy when he had left her. But she had left you before too, Maan when there was no reason for it. Hadn’t she? I married her. His voice came out pained and angry.
 
But that wasn’t enough, was it? She ran away Maan. You know how hard it was to find her last time. We had to hire private agency without letting a word get out.
 
I know, okay. Maan screamed. He was shaking so hard Nikita feared he would blast or collapse. She had seen him like this before and it had pained her then as much as it did now. 

I told you to tell her the truth. Maybe if she knows-
 
She would hate me or freak out and go somewhere I would never be able to reach her. She would think it was my fault. I don’t want to give her another reason to flee.
 
Like she already hasn’t many. Nikita threw her hands up. This is ridiculous. You have to tell her or I’ll, if we ever found her that is, now that she has taken off again.
 
I’ll find her. And you won’t tell her anything. She can’t know.
 
What I can’t know? Geet asked packets falling from her hands, clothes-colorful sarees n suits-spilled out of them. Both Maan and Nikita stilled looking at her as though they had never seen her before.
 
You had gone to shop? Maan spoke, coming out of momentary shock, trying to contain his wayward feelings but failing to hide the relief and terror just the same.
 
Yes. I… went to get something that wives wear. She stared down at the sarees, tears filled her eyes. She had never cried so easily before. But- I should have known. Honestly, I knew always. It was too good to be true. You are hiding something from me. Was this marriage a joke, a game perhaps? She laughed wiping the tears with hands that were suddenly heavy and weak. You had a motive, how… how could you love me?
 
No, love. You are misunderstanding…
 
Please. She raised her hand stopping him from reaching for her. She wasn’t complaining, but was just hurt. Her heart had woven too many dreams in such a small time that it was agonizing now to see them crumble. A sob escaped her lips and before she broke down completely, she ran towards the bedroom.
 





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A/N:
The good weather has rubbed on to me. I think this part came out better than I’d expected just because it’s so dreamy outside with rain pouring. I hadn’t planned to update but I completed this part today and it’s here. I know I update really late. But I promise once am done with Bezuba I’ll concentrate on BF and finish it.


Please COMMENT, if you liked the update...Star


37 comments:

  1. Its freaking awesome yaar...

    Like Geet even m thinking is it a dream and will break when she opens her eyes..but seeing maan.. the childish nature the happiness of her being his wife proves how badly he loves her.. but now.. there is something in this..

    why did nikki say they hired a agency and when was it..not after maan's accident.. or was it tat time... wat our they both hiding and why maan is so fearful at times tat he looks he would collapse tat very moment... why does he get scared tat nikki will tell her something..

    did he by chance.. i mean was he the reason behind the death of her family or was he the reason tat she went to tat prostitution.. something is miserably bad here and maan fears the like anything.. and now geet she heard and she feels tat there is some bad motive of him getting married to her.. like she said dreams breaks when she sees them..

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  2. sad why does their good moments always get ruined so quickly hope he can calm her down and explain what she needs to hear

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  3. its a beautiful update dolly. i loved it a lot. they are finally married. her life had been in so much darkness but somewhere deep within that little hope still exists. it might have be hidden in the darkest corner but nevertheless, it hadnt vanished over time. she still has that old self of hers within, trying hard to come out but scared that it might be crushed and shattered brutally once again. she is so much happy...doing wifely things for him..just for that once person who turned her life into a fairytale.
    but alas, as fate ma have it, there are things kept in the dark. secrecy and turmoil brews up once again to make her doubt herself... to flicker out the flame of hope that she had lighted up once again in her heart-- a hope that one day, her life will be as beautiful as it ever was.
    i am hoping it to be just a misunderstanding but she is really sensitive right now. anything said and done in an incorrect way might push her into the darkness she had never known yet.
    maan loves her madly and he needs to be with her not only for himself but also to make her live this life.
    i want another updt soon dolly. u always stop at the wrong points. but knowing the pace...i dont know after how much long we will get another updt. just take it as a req.. update another part as well.
    love
    sweetu

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    1. aweeeee sweetu cutu.. thnx for the long comment. I promise I will try to update fast, muaaahhhh :*

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  4. awsem update love there cute moments

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  5. its the bestestttt update in this whole story... trust me... n way too special as u updated it after like ages when i almost think that u vl never update it :P
    Finally bad things turned into good things... a girl who was living her life like a nightmare is now got a beautiful life, well a handsome hunk as well... ;)
    now geet is again feeling like living... and thts what i loved the most here... i can see the old geet is coming out of her, which was hidden in the deep corner of her heart... that innocent geet whom maan felt in love with...
    how cutely maan took care of her... he hurt her in anger bt also he's the one to take care f her, how sweet... n geet is now demanding like a perfect wifey... oyee hoyeee... n also went to shop for her... :D
    but again geet heard half n misunderstood it all... hope maan vl make her understand... poor boy suffered a lot so they both deserve the happiness now...
    i just hope u vl let me enjoy the newly wedding couple;s romance and will use ur twist n turn things ryt now... or else im surely gonna throw rotten tomatoes on u... :P
    and yes,,, next update please... n haan ji... A BIG ONE... :P

    _Dipti Sam_

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    1. finally ur comment is here.... me so happy :D Glad u liked it so much. hehe m nt that evil and maybe I'll heed ur request ;) :P thnx so much for the lovely comment <3 <3

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    2. my pleasure... glad tht u liked it... :D... seems like ur blog didnt like my name so ate the cmnts :P
      no prblm , here sam came with anonymous name :P

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    3. sometimes anonymity is a blessing :P hehe

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  6. Lol I have to retype my comment.. =D Maan n Geet meeied. n seeing Geet it seems she is so happy being his wife.. n started weaving hher dreams as his wife.. but dreams shattered when she heard him n nikita talking n hiding something from her.. what's that hope he will tell her..

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  7. awesome update

    -Orchid-/IF

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  8. part 28
    awesome dear..........
    they are married...............
    and Geet is not able to believe it...........
    well Maan loves her so much...........
    OMG what is he hiding from her?
    no wonder shes so hurt............
    hope he doesnt break her.......

    Deepa (spvd)

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  9. awesoem update...
    loved it....

    geet behaving like teenager blushing, giggling to herself and waiting for her husband...
    whining like a child when complaining about her husband to herself.....

    not finding geet at home tensed maan...
    nitika thought geet again ran off leaving maan...

    listening to their talks geet thought maan married her not bcoz he loved her but for some other reasons....

    continue soon
    eagerly waiting

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  10. thank u updating after so long :D
    getting married to him was like a dream come true for her & she doesn't want her this dream to broke so soon. but all the good things comes to an end soon.
    god knows what nikita & maan are hiding from her but their discussion lead to geet had a doubt over maan's intention. i hope he will cleared out this before matter goes out of his hands

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  11. awesome update...loved to read a happy & innocent geet again who dreams....maaneet moments were beautiful....I was scared when maan didn't find geet...She should have informed him....but what is maan hiding??? Is it something related to geet's parents death???....Now again a MU....

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  12. why their happiness ruined always@ nikki what she was saying? Is there any reasn behind wed? Waiting 4 next..awsme update

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  13. why their happiness ruined always@ nikki what she was saying? Is there any reasn behind wed? Waiting 4 next..awsme update..trishTej IF

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  14. Awesome update
    Maaneet married
    Geet accepting the marriage
    N can't belive it's all true not any dream
    But maan assuring her that its truth n he'll be always with her :)
    Loved maans care for geet
    Geet went to shopping but maan was scared that she went away again
    What he's hiding that geet will hate him :|
    But not hearing the half talk geet misunderstood him :O

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  15. awesome update.... happy to see the old glimpse of her... n she is so cute lovely wen she behaves as real herself forgetting tat horrendous years she had gone through.. so naive.. so pure n bubbly... hope they clear their misunderstanding n trust n support one another...

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  16. part 28 - lovely part...geet enjoying her marrige like normal girl...his love changed her lot that she was so happy and she shopped for herself...
    maan- nikki thaought she again fled...what they were hiding...that if she comes to know she will hate him..?
    IF - Madhuri53

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  17. hey its me NoorFatima (from IF duh :P) and I'm back Osheen :D (well not sure for how long) lol .. coming to the story; its simply magic.. girl whatever you do with the story, it will turn out superb, whether it's this ff or some other new one or old.. you are my favourite writer (who miracally hasnt abandoned writing and dont ever do that or i'll kick you :/ )

    maan is a sweetheart and geet is my love (or is it the other way around :/ :P whatever.. as long as there is a maaneet ^_^ <3 )

    when will maan tell geet that he was the same maan from her school.. and i hope geet doesnt think to emotionally before hearing maan out and what he has to say..

    girl update all the ff's soon or else... ... i'll kick you YEAH :| .. loving you definitely doesnt mean that i wont beat you to plum for updating my babies late (grr)

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  18. I cannot believe BF is updated :O lol :P
    Thank you . Aww Geet is wanting to be herself again in happiness of getting married to Maan . Loved the night talk & morning after cuteness . But :( Geet over heard Maan-Nikita's talks . I feel Geet should also tell the truth regards her role in taking some official documents ...

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  19. Awesome update heart breaking that Geet misunderstood him and he still has to tell her that he has been in love with her since back the first time he meet her in college hope he clears her misunderstanding awesome update beautifully done

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  20. Loved the way how Maan assured and took care of Geet in their first night. Geet was worried and scared thinking it’s a dream that will disappear soon..…but Maan was being himself, promising her, hereafter everything will be colourful in their life.
    Geet is really cute, she is whining like a teenager lover, knowing her love leaving her to office on their first day of marriage.
    Maan is tensed once he realise Geet isn’t at home.. Nikita thought she had again run away from home. They are hiding something for Geet., and she heard it right at the time.
    She thought Maan didn’t married her out of love, but he had some other motive. Now she is mad about it and crying…Whatever the reason might be, hopefully Maan would made her understand..
    Geet went for saree and suite shopping. That was really sweet and cute initiate by her. She wanted to change her lifestyle to be a good wife..

    Did you update part29? I can't see that here...

    Ajenn

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  21. Update soon �� waiting❤

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  22. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease update BF :x

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  23. waiting for this ..please

    IF - Madhuri53

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  24. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeej update �� ��

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  25. simply awesome dear. Just loved it

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  26. plz update soon

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