Thursday 17 September 2015

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED, PART 48

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED


PART 48




Geet was sitting on the edge of a plush couch, glancing at the clock repetitively as time stretched- piercing seconds turning into minutes, minutes into hours. The stupid staff of Imperial Hotel wouldn’t give her access to Maan’s room or even tell her his room number explaining that if he’d been expecting someone he would have informed them. She tried to convey the point that he indeed wasn’t expecting her and she was surprising him but to no favorable results. She asked at reception if she could use the phone and tried to contact Maan but couldn’t get through. Left with no other choice but to wait, she sat in the lobby trying to be patient.

Hours later, Maan entered with security personnel and few other people. Her frantic heart automatically eased with his sight. She stared at him in all his commanding glory, giving instructions to one of his employees. Hours of wait, anxiety and fatigue were forgotten as she took a step forward.

When Maan’s eyes ultimately halted at her, it was with confusion, then shock. He blinked thinking he was imagining everything, it wasn’t new for him to see her everywhere. Although, his eyes wandered to the luggage beside n he knew she was there. There, before him in flesh and bone. For a moment, he stood stock-still then as Geet-his love, his wife-increased her pace, he opened his arms for her. It wasn’t deliberate. It was completely instinctual, to offer her the place where she belonged. The world faded into nothingness around them. Geet crashed into him, the force of her, her presence nearly knocked him on his back. After that there remained just peace. He heard the sound of her breath, felt it against his neck and the rapid beat of her heart against his chest. She pulled back and Maan cupped her face, smacked his lips onto hers. In the middle of Hotel foyer, under the gazes of around fifty honorable people and employees, he kissed her hard and good.

Damn, you are here for real. He said while kissing.

Knowing Maan for never being the one to shy, it was Geet who had to break their very public display of affection.

I came for you. She told.

How… he seemed incapable of forming sentences. Why… A whirlpool of emotions swam in his orbs as he looked down at her. I will see you guys later. He told his security and staff n held her hand. He picked her bag next and pulled her with him. Geet had planned to mock the haughty receptionist when Maan arrived, deeming a wink or sticking out of her tongue out perfect for the job but now her mind was just filled with Maan. His cologne enveloped her and his touch on her wrist put her skin on fire.

When they reached his suite on the top floor, Maan put her bag down. He further pulled her into the bedroom. His hold on her wasn’t harsh or compelling, it was gentle. She could stop if she wanted to but she didn’t. She let him guide her. Niks helped me with the formalities-

Maan was shrugging off his coat, his ears not registering her words. Fucking now, talks later. I am Geet-deficient, I need my dose.

Why did you leave me like that then? She hit his chest n he let her do it.

Maybe a sick part of me wanted to know if you would follow me.

If I hadn’t?

That’s the misery of love, Geet, I would still love you. It’s not something I can stop.

But you said you hate me. That hurt me, very badly. She confessed-complained-a hot tears rolling down her cheek. He licked it away.

I didn’t mean it, love. I don’t- I can’t hate you. He helped her out her baggy top n jeans then he removed his shirt n belt, unbuttoning his pants and sliding down the zipper. She lay back on the bed as he backed her then covered her with his body. It was all so natural, their actions in perfect sync, their bodies knowing what they craved. Why you never listen to me? I said no talking. He bit her lower lip and she winced. Maan suckled on the lip to ease the sting and she relaxed under his familiar weight, blood pulsing fiercely in her veins. Open your legs for me. And she did. Before he entered her with a sudden thrust, burying all his length inside her, in a tender, absolutely contradictory moment he kissed her forehead.



The night had fallen when Geet woke up. How long they had made love and then slept? She detached herself from the tangled mess of sheets and limbs and kissed Maan on the shoulder, getting off the bed. Wrapping a sheet around her naked body, she drew open the curtains to reveal floor to ceiling windows. Moonlight and illumination from the many skyscrapers filtered into the room. Her husband was a vision on bed, lying on his stomach, his toned, powerful back exposed, the sheets not covering much. His magnificence outshined the beauty of the cozy bedroom which she was noticing just now.

Opening the glass door, she walked out into the balcony feeling the night air on her arms and neck making her shiver. She was astounded to see how high they were in the sky, almost untouchable. Tokyo’s skyline glittered with neon lights, the roads down were bustling with moving cars and people the size of ants.

She felt warmth in and around herself when two strong arms went around her. She sighed, smiling. Just this morning she was so tormented, and now she was on top of the world, practically. The presence of a single person can make so many changes. You came so far away, to an unknown country, just because I said I was missing you? Maan asked again just because it brought his selfish self so much satisfaction to know she would go to such heights to be with him.

She turned her face around, pulled his head down for a kiss. Despite whatever Maan thought, she would do anything for him, and still couldn’t not repay for how much he gave her when she deserved absolutely nothing. His unadulterated, pure love was what had brought her every inch to life. But she didn’t how to pour all of that out in words. The intensity of her own feelings-that scared her so much-was impossible to convey.

She stared at nothing and sighed, feeling the steady rise and fall of Maan’s chest at her back, giving her strength. I have kept everything inside for so long, I had somewhere begun to believe it was not true, just a bad nightmare that I had watched years ago.

Maan stood in silence trying to make sense of her words. He didn’t interrupt her because how she sagged against him gave him the feeling that she was in need of support and this was something important.

It was my third year of college, I was eighteen that time. I was home during my spring break. My father owned a small textile business, we weren’t one of the richest but we had money. My sister was newly promoted, she was a software engineer. My mother was in search of a good guy for her but my sister had other plans, she liked this really nice guy in her office who was her very good friend. Those were the happy days, the normal days. At end of my of my vacation they all wanted to see me off to the college. We were on the highway, when our car met with an accident. Last thing I remembered was my sister pushing me out of the door and the car crashing into a tree before my eyes n then catching fire.

  



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16 comments:

  1. Finally Geet is where she belongs but still she has to tell him about Dev though she started with her life story she has long way and hope she tells him the truth.

    Maan wat can i say coz i'm in love with this maan. his love for geet is pure right nw. dont know about future but right now all he wants is geet and her love no barriers between them

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  2. :D :D :D maaneet met :D :D :D
    Maan wanted to see if geet will come behind him!!! :/
    Wow geet sharing her past!!!

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  3. finally geet is opening up about her past... now maan wont hav any doubt after knowing all...

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    1. finally geet talking..
      and decided to share what maan what to hear.
      seeing geet there for him he just lost all this control.
      and then geet overwhelmed with maan love..

      loved it

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  4. Ohhhhh Geet finally talking about her past ..
    going to read next update :-)
    SONA :)

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  5. Loved the update
    Maan was surprised and finally gave up the fight
    She is opening up

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  6. Finally. You might not believe but I actually breathed a sigh of relief reading Maan opening his arms for and engulfing his world and claiming her. That was pure bliss. It's a wonder when I feel so many emotions in me when I'm reading an update. Going through so much over simple but powerful words. It's amazing.

    If I would be getting such a passionate reunion then I won't mind seeing them separated for a day or two. But not the hurtful separation that was tearing their hearts apart when they were close yet chose to stay at a distance. That was unbearable. But I guess needed. Cos I see Geet opening up a bit. Even if it's little I want her to share and lessen her burden, her pain and everything she went through for 5 bloody long years. One moment is enough to change your entire self. And here Geet was forced into something all of sudden when she was on the verge of making career plans and enjoying with her family. One accident and she lost her family forever and also lost herself in a flesh business. How much can one take after all? It's surprising she is living and breathing. Still has so much love in herself to give to Maan, Manan and Nikita. Cos after enduring what she did, it's impossible too feel any emotion in us. People grow cold. But Geet is all ready to mother an adopted 5 years old and trying her best to start a life and move on. I can't explain how much I love her strength. She is a miracle and she is incredible. And Maan is awesome to love a broken girl so selflessly.

    Beautiful update Osheen.

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  7. Finally Geet took a step.. n now.. evry pain doesn't matter when they are together.. Maan really wanted her to follow him.. well he should thank Nikita for it.. she arranged everything for Geet.. n his love came back to him... Geet really care for Manan too.. isn't it enough Maan to know that she will love u n ur family no matter what.. He seriously need to make a knot of this thing forever in his mind.. becoz there are lots of in his family who would want to give un Geet pain..

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  8. Heyyyyy osheeennnn......
    Wooowwwwww......dat was such a dreamy scene.....and very filmy as well......:D:D.....
    Straight from the movies where the guy opens his arms for the lady love....and the gal runs in slow motion .....taking all the time in the world to show the happiness for each oddr......lolzzz.....but i must say the scene was very magical...adorable...and very very beautyfull....:)
    I feel so happy for maan....the guy hass always been the first one to make an effort to make things right between them......and now he totally deserved being the one to recieve ....to be persuaded... .

    I guess geet was able to see through maan s suffering and pain beyond her own pain...untill now her fears and insecurities were not allowing her to let go..
    ...may be dat s y she could nt wait any longer to comfort him....and most importantly she is now ready to share her past with maan.......
    So i guess ...the seperation was kinda justified..... and very much needed... ..both for maan and geet... .

    And osheen i totally llllllllloooooooovvvvvveeeeee ur cover picture. .....earlier wen u updated i thought it was a random edit u made keeping in mind maaneet from dis ff.....but now seeing it in dis update ...in the scene where u have set it.....it was even more magical....my liking for the edit has doubled....:)....
    And this.particular line in the ff held my attrntion...
    That’s the misery of love, Geet, I would still love you. It’s not something I can stop.....

    His love is obviously unconditional and beyond any bounds.......but it also shows how hopeless and helpless he can get...wen it comes to geet.....very beautyfull lines....

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  9. Oh man awww Geet flies all the way to Japan to surprise her man . Maan enters with delegates & finds Geet waiting for him in the lobby . Needless he's elated seeing her comin all the way for him . He felt good after she paid attention to someone other than him i.e. :P she is finally opening upto him from the start I guess . Hopefully this talk will lessen their pain n help them understand each other .

    Beautiful update❤❤❤❤.

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  10. @tania here.just loved maaneet scene in hotel.geet had to wait for maan bcoz hotel not listened her.but maan s open kiss to geet shut everyone mouth.his jaan,his wife came to meet him just he only said,he miss her.geet fully gave herself to maan.bcoz maan wanted to his daily dosse then talk.both r now in peace.after then geet started talking about her past.

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  11. love the update ..finally geet back to her own place ..in maan's arm ..the real her with her love ..maan shocked to see her but welcomed her with open arms..bless moment ..they were together and now geet opening a little ..hope she shares all with maan ..

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  12. It’s a blissful moment for both of them, Maan surprised seeing Geet there waiting for him. Once he confirmed he is literally present then, without hesitation he opened wide his arm for her. Geet was in joy seeing her love welcoming her, she ran fast and hugged him with great force. They didn’t care anything or anyone around them. Only they themselves….
    Glad things getting back fine between them, thou there are so many unsolved mysteries yet they are talking like before, that is all needed for now. Maan was disoriented without Geet and he need his dose for all the sleepless night he had.
    Now Geet had slowly opened up about herself, even Maan is surprised and doesn’t want to stop her….



    ajenn

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  13. finallyy they both are together their long pan wll subside now nd geet tellng her past n i hope geet tell all abut dev too

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  14. she showed that she's crazy for him just the he is. Maan was happy to see her in that hotel he was staying.

    IF id: impoojaverma

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  15. Part 48
    Finally Geet reached to maan. Liked the way she gave look to the receptionist. They missed each other a lot. Finally she opened up with him. She told her past, how their car met accident and how her sister saved her pushing her from the car. All were dead expect her.

    IF - Madhuri53

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