Monday 21 September 2015

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED, PART 51

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED


PART 51




Three days after Manan’s heart breaking departure, Geet sat on the balcony reading To kill a mocking bird. She was on a rather interesting juncture in the story but her mind simply refused to concentrate on the black letters printed over white. Finally giving up she closed the hardcover and kept it on the table. Lying back on the lounge chair she tried to ward off the silence. But it wasn’t going anywhere, it remained rooted around her. She wondered how more days it would take for the absence created by Manu to diminish and disappear.

She had tried to keep herself busy, had even taken up meager jobs of cleaning and helping Nina in the kitchen. Surprising the cook wasn’t so hostile of her anymore. It was because of Manu, Geet knew. That kid was magic.

Not the chores or books had helped keep her engaged all the time. She ran out of things to do, got bored of reading and that’s when her mind wandered to bad places. It wandered to her cell phone where Dev still called and dropped a threatening message every now n then. Geet always worried Maan finding out about them, so she made sure her phone was hidden when Maan was there with her. She thought about changing her number but that would only result in Maan asking questions. The Dev-il, on the other hand, would get hold of her new number sooner or later.

The tedious task of hiding the incessant phone calls n messages from Maan made her aware of all that she had not disclosed to her husband. Their marriage was going through some rocking grounds as it was, Maan knowing how that she had betrayed him in the manner she had was going to be the final blow.

Feeling hopeless and lost, Geet absently rubbed her stomach thinking if she should have taken Maan on his offer when he had suggested that she should work in KC. Although, nobody liked her there, they would have thought she was Maan’s whore who had climbed the company hierarchy by bedding their boss. They would have hated her for working with them. She had experienced the hatred first hand when she had operated in KC for a few days. Besides, Geet had been honest about not wanting to work. She had worked hard and dirty for number of years, now she wanted to rest. Sit back, be a family woman, keep her family happy and not do a shit job at it.

Her phone rang inside the room. It wasn’t the ringtone she had set for Maan. It wasn’t the one she had set for Dev either. She went in to check who it was and was surprised to see it was Shaan. They hadn’t talked after that party where her possessive husband had punched Shaan in the face.

Hey. Geet said cautiously.

How’s everything going, princess? At Shaan’s normal voice, Geet felt relieved and joyous. So he wasn’t angry at all.

Good, mostly. What about you?

I have to tell you something Geet. Why don’t you come to our usual restaurant?

I can’t. Geet said. She so wanted to go n meet Shaan but Maan wouldn’t like that. Also, although the topic hadn’t come up, Maan didn’t exactly say whether she could go out on her own or not.

Geet, it’s important. I wouldn’t have made such a demand otherwise. His somber n urgent tone made her anxious. If Shaan was being this serious it was certainly something very important.

Damn, I hope it isn’t something bad. I will be there in a bit.



She reached the restaurant, not forgetting to take the car and a security guard with her. Maan was obviously keeping tabs on her. If he knew she was meeting Shaan, she would tell that at least she had taken car n security with her for a change.

Shaan had already ordered the burger she preferred. She took a seat opposite him, they had barely exchanged greeting before she asked. So what is it?

Her friend was only too eager to tell. I went to this function yesterday, a charity auction. Maan was there too but only for about ten minutes. Geet raised her brows wondering where this was going. Just as he left Deepika arrived like she was avoiding him or something. I know she is because I have observed her coming to every gathering only once Maan has left.

Geet nodded. Yeah, my guess is same. It’s because she knows Maan and I- Umm… you continue.

Okay, so she came. It was the usual mixing and talking with everyone. Then I saw her talking with Dev who was already there. I have never liked that kid; most people know that he isn’t very fond of Maan. That was the reason he wasn’t in Deepika good books ever. Yesterday though, they were talking like old friends, hushed voices n all. I found it odd. Being me, I tried to figure it out. They moved away from the crowd, out of the main section. I followed them n I think they didn’t see me because I heard Maan’s name been taken n yours too, more than once. I couldn’t get what actually they were talking but it just didn’t sit well with me. It felt like they are up to something. I wanted to tell you as soon as I can. Maybe I am just being stupid, or maybe I am not.

Geet sat frozen in her place, dread coiling around her. Her throat had suddenly gone dry. With trembling hands, she grabbed the glass of water n drank it all in one go. Then set it down a bit too harshly. So it wasn’t Dadimaa who had told him. She said to herself.

Told who n what? Geet, are you alright? Shaan asked, concern lacing his voice seeing how the blood had drained from her face.

Shaan, Maan n I, we are married. Geet told him, knowing she could trust him with the secret.

Untold emotions passed across his face, before he schooled his expressions. Well, you didn’t even call me at the wedding. His voice lacked the intended playfulness; there was shielded pain underneath, which Geet failed to notice.

It was meant to be a secret considering I was a… you know what. But Deepika got to know, I told her in a moment of heat, not long after I found out Dev knows about it too. I had thought it was Maan’s Dadimaa told him but apparently I was wrong. She didn’t realize how badly she was shaking as she covered her face with cold hands. Shaan rounded the table and came to sit beside her. He held her around the shoulder.

Geet, did something happen? You look shaken up, princess. Deepika or Dev did something to you?

She raised her head. I am scared to them, of Dev more than anything. He is evil.

Tell me what he did and I swear to god I’ll make him pay. At her weary shake of head, Shaan figured Geet was uncomfortable with the topic. Going against everything in him, he let it go. The thing that Geet liked most about him; he never pressurized or forced something. He was a true friend, ready to lend a shoulder just to cry on.

Have you told Maan about Dev?

No. I can’t. It’s complicated. She sighed, trying to get a grip on herself. Thank you, for letting me know, Shaan. After everything that you endured because of me, you are still here. I respect n adore you for that really. And what happened the other day at party… I am really sorry that Maan punched you.

Shaan chuckled. It’s okay. If I were in his place I would have done the same. Now about the thanks, you don’t have to say it, darlin’. You know how much I love you; you can always count on me. He punched her shoulder lightly with a wink, making Geet smile despite everything. In a moment of seriousness, he added. Remember if you are in a problem-any kind, any time-just give me a call, okay?

Geet nodded. Okay.



I went out today. Geet told Maan in the evening before he could to ask her about it.

I know. You took the car and security, so it’s all right. I don’t want to know where you went as long as I know you are safe. He stretched his legs so she could take a seat. Geet settled against the warm comfort of his body.

So I’m not grounded.

No, love, you are not. You have all the freedom that you want. Just think about me when you are out and be safe.

She gave Maan a long thank you kiss. I love you.

So do I. He said.


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15 comments:

  1. SO wat the two devils are upto.. why do i feel tat dev and deepika are operating as a team and using geet against maan to destroy him or it might be deepika using dev to get rid of geet and shaan omg such he truly a sweet person..he truly kept his friendship and told geet about them but geet she is still taking it lightly by not letting maan know

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  2. dev and deepika is upto something..
    shaan is truely a good friend informed about his doubts.
    and the hurt he felt when geet told him about their marriage..

    I think geet should let maan know about dev.
    god knows what evilnes he is upto..

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  3. Heyyyy osheeennnn...:)
    U find my comments surprising .....in a bad way or good way...??...lolzzzz.....i am so glad u find my comments wonderful.....thank u so much.....:):)....
    Its soooo nice to see dat writers reading and replying to d comments....:D
    Anyways coming to d update....in a way geet is wrong on one side as well as her still hiding the dev s mattr from maan is somewhere justified......
    her being scared about breaking of her marriage....so .May be her fear of losing her happiness which she has found after such a hard time.....i would nt say its right....but she is helpless in a way......
    And on the oddr hand .....she has started to trust maan....and she has even shared her past...may be she should take a chance and also confess everything about dev .......and after all she did d nasty thing for dev initially wen she was not sure about her relationship with maan...may be maan would understand it......
    So i am in a fixx...to tell wddr she did the right thing by hiding things from maan or not....
    And coming to shaan......uts sought of not convincing me dat he is a true friend of geet and he is being genuine enough in helping her......not everyone can accept geet the way she is ....even if its as a friend .....not many ppl can do it easily....so dat is kinda tensing dat dis matter may add to her already full basket of problems...
    But if shaan is still being the good guy.....den i hope he will be a true friend for geet...after all she does nt have may of such ppl in life....

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  4. Hmm deepika n dev planning together?? :/
    Well r they together from beginning or now?? But deepika is mainly for maans power where dev wants to snatch that... So kinda twisted hows favouring whom :/
    Chalo least geet got a frnd who can help her against dev-ilss....
    But her best option is maan himself -_-

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  5. @tania here.geet missing manu.feeling bore.suddenly shaan called her for giving her an important news.but geet went there with security.deepika and dev now together to make seperate maneet.deps told dev about maaneet wedding.geet also told shaan about her wedding.shaan is really a good friend.why geet not tell everything to maan.why is she waiting for?feeling scare for geeet

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  6. Omggggg it's Scary yar ...
    Running to read next update :-)
    SONA :)

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  7. dev n deepika together... double devil... omg...
    cool dats maan n geet r all cool...

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  8. Shaan he is really good friend.. despite of his feelings for Geet.. n he has shown that toady but hope Geet will tell him though.. but she needs to tell him abt Dev too.. but she has gone to meet shaan that's what she can tell.. but deepika n Dev is being trouble for Geet.. hope Maan would get to know abt dev from somewhere.. Shaan can tell him.. but i wonder he will beilieve it or not.. just don't want geet to go thru pain again...

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  9. Awww Geet is missing Manan and getting bored being home alone. It was obvious. I guessed it.

    Her still not confining in Maan about Dev-il is something I understand. I won't say she is right doing that but I understand. In her place, nothing can be certain ever. Nothing can be forever. Her past ghost are going to haunt her always. Also she has helped Dev in ditching Maan in the past. She has betrayed Maan by hiding the file and later informing Dev of Maan's whereabouts and he had attacked Maan. So all that can go back at Geet and she can lose Maan's trust forever. And losing Maan is something Geet can't take. Not after all that has happened to her. She has survived after losing her family, she survived her prostitution years as well but she would be shattered if she lost Maan. After getting the happiness, love, care, a husband despite her past, a son; I can't imagine what will she do if Maan leaves her. But again, I would have loved it had she trusted Maan and confess the whole truth before he comes to know about it from elsewhere. That will hurt him more. I'm scared for MG and their relationship.

    Is Shaan really a good person? I mean, after all that happened with him, he still is ready to help Geet and continue to be her friend. Sometimes it's hard to trust him as well. But she sounded genuine. I liked their scenes. He was like a true friend. No matter what he told her what he found odd so that Geet is aware and well prepared.

    Wondering what Dev-il and Deepika are planning. Looks like they have joined hands against Maan and Geet. Both wants to separate them and I'm guessing even Dadima is with them. She never liked Geet and she wanted Deepika as her daughter in law.

    At the end I liked Geet said she went out but how I wish she even confessed she went to meet Shaan. Maan on the other hand does trust her blindly as long as he knows she is safe. So why can't she bring herself to share everything that transpired btw her and that Dev-il?

    Intriguing update.

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  10. Geet should tell about d2 let maan handle them waiting for the next update

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  11. Yheee finally that angle is coming abt Geet telling the truth abt Dev _/\_ Shaan tells something is cooking between Dev & Deepika . He meets her & tells that he heard Deepika & Dev tke their name multiple times . Geet states in nervousness that she is married , Shaan although heart-broken still tells Geet can count on him always .
    Thank God Maan din misunderstand her !!!

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  12. I feel that it’s high time for Geet to tell the truth about Dev and she had helped him few times in initial stage. She should not be hiding it anymore. She had all courage to speak about her past now she should also speak Dev.
    She might be scared thinking Maan would start hating her but if she speaks the truth then surely Maan would side her. He can never stop loving Geet.
    Shaan seems to be really good towards Geet. He’s all fine with Geet using him, loving Maan , secretly married with Maan. Really strange… But hopefully he stays the same till end. Just like Geet said she only have two friend, Nikita and Shaan. And Shaan is really and special friend to her…
    Shaan meet up with Geet and told her about the new friendship between Deepika and Dev. So it was Deepika whom told Dev about Maaneet married. This two surely planning something evil now…
    I wish Geet told Maan that she went to meet Shaan. Thou Maan was being fine that she went out but with security with her. But at least she should have told him she meet Shaan. Or Maan already knew with whom she went out to meet….


    ajenn

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  13. so deepka was one who tol about maanet mrg to dev n i am still wondering why dont geet tell about dev t o maan n shaan he is awseum friend

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  14. dev & deepika are together! it seems like. Geet is playing very dangerously now. they both are surely upto something. it's good that shaan warned her.

    IF id: impoojaverma

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  15. Part 51
    She was enjoying her time at home doing household chores. Shaan contacted her to meet her for imp info. He told that deepika & dev were cooking something. She was scared of both of them. She told shaan about their marriage. He was heartbroken and accepted that he now has no chance. He so sweet & true friend that he warned her before hand about dev’s planning. She could have told maan about dev as she was scared of breaking up marriage. How this going to solve.? How dev will be punished..?

    IF - Madhuri53

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